- I gave examples in each paragraphs about the five different boroughs that i am talking about in my essay.
- I also gave a thesis statement that included the topic that I am writing about and how it classified.
I think my essay will be edcuated to the reader in a way because if they don't know the history or anything about the five boroughs my essay could be useful to read. Also my essay is useful because it's NYC the place we live in so we have to know how the boroughs got thier name, their quailites and etc.
